She was amazing in a way,

That only stars are when they shine,

And her smile,

Lit up the moments of my life,

And while I knew enough to keep her heart,

Would love live on with time,

Or will I always hope one day she’s truly mine.

* So yeah this is the first verse of a song I’m working on. Its more just working itself. I think I have a beautiful bridge melody lined up for it too. Just gotta dig it out the soul a little more.

one of my biggest questions is whether to write it in the past tense as above, or in the present tense as below ? Lemme know what you think…

She is amazing in a way,

That only stars are when they shine,

And her smile,

Lights up the moments of my life,

And while I know enough to keep her heart,

Will love live on with time,

Or will I always hope one day she’s truly mine.