The Daily Dose: Stealing Strawberry Kisses (bridge & chorus)

Just came up with a possible bridge. As it stands I like the melody more than the words. But I’ll just work it and keep you updated. Also I decided to go with the present tense version of the verse.

BRIDGE

But wasn’t this supposed to feel like flying,

Then why am I still stranded on the ground,

Wasn’t like I stopped and gave up trying,

For now I know the fate that I most own.

*and while we’re at it, how bout a rough chorus.

CHORUS

So I’ll be…STEALING STRAWBERRY KISSES,

Till she can find us more time,

And we can share them in private,

Till there’s no reason to lie.

I’m…STEALING STRAWBERRY KISSES,

Sweeter than peaches and cream,

And at least I know she saves them just for me,

One day we’ll be free.

And know more STEALING STRAWBERRY KISSES.

Cos’ she’ll be with me.

Now the question is where the story goes next, what does the listener wanna know next. Maybe you have some suggestions, lemme know ?????